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Please post one or two thesis statements

Tuesday, May 6th, 2008

Remember: good writing is simple, direct and CLEAR, focusing on your IDEA; your idea should not be obfuscated by “thick” or ambiguous language.
USE PRESENT TENSE
Revise by highlighting all TO BE verbs; prepositional phrases; who, which, that clauses.  Look carefully to see whether you need those groups of words, or are they cluttering your sentences?
NO Fluff!
NO [...]

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